So I like these ideas and words but I think I strung them together clunkily... But my time is up for today :)Radiant regal resplendent beautyCryptic when deep as a plumHiding a juicy secret beneath that tight skinFlirty and fresh, a harbinger of changeWhere the sunrise melts the night skyI feted each new life with nurseries jewel-draped One misty and amythest, the next playful and boldHow could I know how clearly Those choices would mirror these gems?My mysterious boy, too much breadth and depthTo be handed a single drenched grapeHe infuses each moment with intense introspectionToo much of one thing's more than he can bear.My playful little girl, bold and fearlessEmbracing life's fullness with joyful abandonShe merited the strong contrasts and dense saturationAgainst settings of rich midnight and diamond-whiteYes, every princess wraps robes in its glory 'round gentle-strong shoulders
purple? right! I like the poem very much and very true :) miss you guys.
Loved fiddlinmama’s poem so much! Can’t compete with that, but here goes..Deep as the AdriaticOn a far-away Grecian shoreThe color of a night skyNot yet ebonyWith hints of seagrass beneathOr shallow and transluscent, blanketing a warm coral reefWhere I long to diveSomewhere at a slower Caribbean paceMy favorite shirt and my eyes when I wear itA smoky gem the catalog saidWho knows the name this season for that hue of indigo dreams It is my happy placemy Mediterranean escapelike the walls of this roomwhere I hide from the worldsoaking in my private pool of familiar muted azure--a mirror for my quiet cerulean soul
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